Mise-en-scene makeover: Learner response

1)

WWW: 

-good titles: sections 

-good structure 

     -a name shown at start 

-effective/appropriate music

-meeting the deadline 

-effective time lapse editing 

-good moving camera at the end 

-original contend/genre 

-good use of make up

EBI:

-more appropriate typography

2)
WWW:
-good synchronization with the music and the visuals
-good lighting
-nice close up
-good music
-good make up
-good transitions

EBI:
-more editing
-maybe explain more what you're doing with the makeup

3)
WWW:
-good lighting
-good close up at the beginnig and at the end
-the transformations were synchronized with the music
-good background music

EBI:
-use more editing
-the fading music
-explain what is used while doing the makeup

4)
It helped us a lot to work faster when we had a clear plan of what we wanted to do.
5)
I would use more text to explain in more detail how the makeup was done. I would also find a better quality of camera and a better background. I could also explain the process by adding a voice over.

6)
Mise-en-scene is a very big aspect when it comes to any media. You need to be very precized because every detail will be seen and recievied by and audience.