Cinematography video feedback and learner response

WWW:
-no dialogue - economical storytelling
-well shaped
-wide range of shots
-performances- realistic,
-editing- use of flashbacks
             -cross-cutting technique
-well paced
-sound towards end/ climax

EBI:
-include music earlier
-sound- too uneven

WWW:
-good editing x2
-nice storytelling
-the diegetic sound
-variety of shots x2

EBI:
-smoother transitions x2
-add music x3

4) Now reflect on your work and write your own comments. Add three WWWs and three EBIs underneath the rest of your feedback.

I think the audio in my video is something that is the biggest problem. I could've add some music in the background. Also the shots aren't glued together properly.

WWW:
-nice editing
-variety of shots

EBI:
-smoother transitions
-add music, even a quite one

5) Learner response: think about what you learned making the video and also watching others. What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer? What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time? Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?

I will definitely organise my time more and add the music to the video. I also need to improve my editing skills and watch out for the focus in the camera. It's also hard to put the pieces together without no music in the background.