Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the six categories. 

WWW: 
original content 
well rehears - fluent 
some terminology 
intriguing narrative structure
very good slides 
other settings - Poland 
good use of terminology 
very good use of social media 
     - psychographics  
mental health issues 

EBI:
spelling - spell-check !
too much on name derivation
look directly at audience 
some wrong formatting  
slideshow timing 
        - auto- formatting 
ending 

1. 4
2. 4
3. 4
4. 4
5. 4 
6. 4

24/30

classmates feedback:

WWW:
- really good content 
- interesting idea 
- a lot of terminology 
- interesting 
- confident, well rehearsed 

EBI:
- a bit confusing
- not enough terminology 

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW:
-the idea is original 
-the slides were well prepared 

EBI:
- better with presenting - look more at the audience 
- check the text
3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

I definitely need to look in more detail and the context as well as content. I need to put more pressure on the drama and try to make it look like genre. The narrative needs more details as well, I need to create content for each episode. The planning can still change and I need to look at my characters more and find an important role for them that will push the narrative and create unexpected plot for one of them.
I have to think more about lighting and the character development, I feel like everyone in the class a pretty clear understanding of other characters, I focused mainly on the main one.