Preliminary exercise learner response

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW:
shot revers shot
-dialogue
close up
voice over
angles 
sound design
music in headphones 
handheld
POV shot

EBI:
context
camera focus
editing - more slick
night schooting 

WWW:
good camerawork
nice track
emotional 

EBI:
a bit confusing 
better locations 

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene.

WWW:
good soundtrack
the voiceover
editing

EBI:
Better transitions
clearer sound
better night shots

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I think it was pretty good, considering the narrative of the show and the aesthetics I want my trailer to have.

4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

There should always be a plan B for shooting unprofetional video because sometimes mise-en-scene or lighting or any aspect of creating a video could be different from what you wanted it to be.

5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything in your actual TV drama trailer? This could include narrative, character and script or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork and sound.

I'll definitely make it more bright and sarcastic rather than dark and horror-like.